Monday, September 3, 2012

When the happy bird sang a sad song!


Dry tears spill softly
Heart shudders at every thought
Loneliness prevails

Flowers do not bloom
Happy bird sings slow sad song
Not the only one


This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'LONELINESS'.


17 comments:

  1. Lonliness with a touch of Melancholy!
    Beautiful!

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  2. not the only one! :(
    heart of a bird... lovely pranita...
    amazingly crafted as ever!

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  3. Pranita--so sad. Beautiful--and signhing in images--response to the prompt.

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  4. "dry tears"...an interesting and intriguing image!

    Loneliness of Stars

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  5. Lot of sadness here...loneliness troubles yes..

    RS:)

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  6. Loneliness was so beautifully illustrated through your words !!!

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  7. Beautiful haiku describing loneliness. I especially like the second one with the line "not the only one"

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  8. Loneliness IS sad. Solitude is not.

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  9. Beautiful haiku describing loneliness....Good one Pranitha....

    Lonely girl

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  10. Loneliness leads to despair - the world is incomplete...

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  11. I can understand the pain here...

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/09/loneliness-haiku.html

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  12. Wow! That's a wonderful click.. What software you used to get that effect?

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