Saturday, September 22, 2012

The secret song of every heart!


Focus driven eyes
Beaks peck to pick out the tune
High spirits sung sweet

Song of heart in flight
Heavenly hums reach abode
Divine purity 


This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'HUMMING BIRD'. 

18 comments:

  1. "Heavenly hums reach abode" - a magical haiku :-)

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  2. You have weaved it well.. I liked it Pranita..

    RS:)

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  3. "Peck to pick" good choice of words :)
    Elegant looking pigeon in the pic.
    Keep posting Pranita :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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  4. I loved the line.. 'High spirits sung sweet'
    Such a high indeed!! Loved the whole concept of thought & expression!!
    Keep the Spark ALive..

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  5. Your haiku is lovely today. I like "high spirits sung sweet" is a favourite line for me :-)

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  6. Very different look at a 'humming bird." I like it.

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  7. Good approach and telling wonder differently. Nice.

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  8. Such a different, but wonderful, take on hummingbird.

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  9. Omg pranita!<3
    I must say, you just keep on going high and higher with all these haiku!:D
    Looks like you've kinda mastered it:)
    *Lots of love*:)

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  10. Thank you all... :) I feel blessed!

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  11. Not a great photographer myself, but the photo would have looked better with less saturation and decreased brightness.
    Like the haiku. Somehow, reminds me of Hannibal Lecter. Maybe all haikus do :))

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  12. Good one, I love the mystical meaning!

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