Friday, September 28, 2012

The Battlefield - Last beat screams victory!


Chain my soul to dust
Bleed dry pumping heart for peace
Last beat screams victory!


'When you hear the last beat of my heart, you'll know we won!'

This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'BATTLEFIELD'.


13 comments:

  1. You have captured the essence of a battle perfectly ... well done !!!

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  2. Last beat screams victory...indeed ..very well said Pranita..

    RS:)

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  3. Chain my soul to dust - that is a great lead-in line. Excellent haiku

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  4. Last scream ... very strong take on battlefield.

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  5. "chain my soul to dust", what powerful words these are and the rest of your haiku as well. Very strong and so well said.

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  6. You have captured the tragedy of the battlefield well. Very strong!!

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  7. I thot it very strong too, the strength perfectly displayed via your art

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  8. your haiku touched deep within ...nice !!

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  9. Yikes....thats a dangerous looking chainand aptly suits your haiku Pranita:)
    Keep writing :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in

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  10. Wow--this is so profound. Well done.

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  11. That is very powerful and I love it x

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  12. Thanks all of you for this overwhelming response! Much appreciated!
    Cheers!

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