Saturday, September 1, 2012

Creepy thorns to glistening petals!


Creepy thorns rise high
Drawbridge of my life saves me
Petals glisten, smile!


I just joined my first job yesterday. What seemed like a thorny way has finally been crossed and now i can feel all the fear of the unknown slowly make way for beautiful times ahead!

Seeking all your blessings to make this journey one of my best! :)


This Haiku is written for the September Challenge in Haiku Heights. The prompt for today is 'DRAWBRIDGE'.




44 comments:

  1. All the best for this new turn in your life :-)

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  2. Unique Haiku, Pranita. All the best in your new job.

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  3. Nicely done. I love this haiku ... it's so in balance. Good job.

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  4. Blessings!! Love the haiku especially the little surprise of 'petals glisten'

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  5. Exquisite, Pranita :)
    Thats a nice Haiku and equally captivating photograph.
    All the best for the new job :D :D :D
    Keep posting Pranita :)

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. Thanks a lot Jay for uplifting my spirits with ur generous comment! :)

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  6. Brilliant job Pranita. That were some beautiful lines I read. :)

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  7. Lovely Haiku...and congratulations on your first job..enjoy the feeling..it's tough road out there..but you will make it....I know..

    For my haiku.. http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/08/wounded-walls-feel-safe.html#comment-form

    RS:)

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    1. Thanks a lot Ramesh ji! Seeking blessings :)

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  8. Awesome! and Congrats on your first job.

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  9. I like the imagery of thorns rising high

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  10. I like the transition from thorns to petals. Comforting.
    I hope your job is all petals (maybe with an occasional thorn, just to make it more interesting) :-)

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    1. Aww.. thank u so much buddy! I really hope so too... :)

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  11. Good use of tension in making this challenge work so well!

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  12. All the best... even I am starting my career from Monday... cheers to us!

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    1. Wow... really! That's too cool.. All the very best to u too dude!
      Cheers! :)

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  13. "Creepy Thorns" Liked it.. Congrats on your job and Good luck!

    Someone is Special

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  14. I'm bemused by the image: Petals Glisten,smile!

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  15. Pranita,
    Congratulations on your new job! All the Best for future!

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  16. Aren't you glad for the safety afforded by the drawbridge? :)

    Drawbridge

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  17. Congratulations, Pranita! Now that you've crossed the drawbridge away from the thorns, I hope your future is full of flowers.

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    1. Thanks a lot Patti for this beautiful wish! :)

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  18. Congrats and all the very best for you future.. and keep blogging
    Mind Stuff

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  19. Blessings be yours as you use your drawbridge in this new journey you are taking.

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    1. Thanks a lot for your blessings Hazel! :)

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