Monday, June 25, 2012

The black fist of fury!


Black fist of fury
With every rise of evil
Fear the judgement time

Bad bags support quick
Crystal clear ideas melt
Leave even quicker




Every time evil rises, there is a final D-day when the judgement is passed by what we call Karma. I think we should fear that day when we feel happy by achieving something the wrong way. History is proof, bad always gets support of people like moths to the flame. But when the flame goes out, the moths fly away in search of another one. We retain only what we have gained by doing good, never the one by doing wrong.. intentionally or otherwise!


This Haiku is written for the picture prompt provided by the MAG and the word prompts provided by the Haiku Heights (SUPPORT) and the OSI (CRYSTAL).



20 comments:

  1. i would agree that day is coming...and if we are mindful of it what a more full life we can live...but most i think have little in the way of fear of it...

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    1. Mindful efforts, really the need of this hour!

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  2. I enjoyed your sentiments. You speak the truth. We should only achieve goals through honesty and hard work though other methods offer short cuts, it will come back to haunt you. Nicely written.

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    1. Thanks a lot :) M glad u agree...

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  3. I hope my comment went through to you as I received an error but I enjoyed your poem immensely.

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    1. Thanks a lot for taking the trouble to comment agn ;) Loadsa love...

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  4. Nice message a in few words...loved your haiku :-)

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  5. Your words are very deep amd wise Pranita, i will think about them , i hope this idea grows in me over time , thanks, Kuta'

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    1. Thanks Kutamun for giving my thoughts some of ur own! :)

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  6. Description,. is that really you!

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    1. Unless you have the password to login to my blog :P

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  7. Super stuff! Great expression of a real world sentiment! Hits home like a shot.

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  8. its superb,, the blog is so colorful..

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  9. Words in depth indeed. I'm not so sure if I totally believe in Karma as I've had a lot conflicting views on it.

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    1. I believe very strongly in Karma.. Not dat m imposing my views on u or anybdy for dat matter! Time will tell :)

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