Monday, April 23, 2012

Spellbound, mesmerized! - A Haiku.




 Pearls match ocean white
Mermaid swims up to the rock
Waits for prince Charming

Lil' star fish whispers
'He arrives on full moon night'
Lips curve to a smile

Gazing brightest star
In love, her thirsty eyes seem
Spellbound, mesmerized!




This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is 'MESMERIZE'.











18 comments:

  1. This one was a easy reading after a longtime and beautifully written!

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  2. A good story here..indeed mesmerising.. well done..

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  3. Can see, the beautiful spellbound mesmerized eyes..

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    1. Happy dat it painted the picture for you! :)

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  4. Lovely haiku...enchanting story ~

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  5. Beautiful and simple... great work there

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  6. I just go through the post. Really nice. Thank you for sharing.

    ERP gujarat

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  7. Lovely!
    Beautiful story...I can imagine this in my dreams!
    Sweet escape

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    1. Thanks so much Valli... :) Dreamland is the best place to live in ;)

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  8. good one Pranita...well done... :)

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